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| chibs 2005-11-19 ch 1, anon. | abusetee hee. cute |
| Sapphire Gardevoir and Star... 2004-10-18 ch 1,  | abuseCuteness!^__^ I love Goku-Goten stories, there my fav. charachters! But there is so little of them here It's all Goku and Gohan or Goku and ChiChi. Theres even more Goku and Pan stories and she's beem around a short time. I keep finding stories where Goku ignores him or abuses him and thats not ok. But nice fic. write others! ^o^ |
| Ravenpan 2004-02-16 ch 1, | abuseThat was great! *hugs Son family* |
| VegetaGokuLover 2002-11-03 ch 1, | abuseGreat job.. you have this uncanny talent for making the best fanfic, out of a situation that's not so exciting. You made every part of this exciting.. and that's awesome. |
| Carrots and Veggies 2002-08-28 ch 1, | abuseAWWWWWWWWWW! That was so kawaii! I just love Gokou and Goten storys! I think there are WAY too many Vegeta/Trunks or Vegeta/Bura stories... -.-' Oh well... Great story! Keep up the good work! Bai! |
| mae7 2002-05-06 ch 1, | abuseI'm back yet AGAIN. Simply loved how you portrayed Goku's irrational fear of the hospital. You have a talent for making something interesting out of the seemingly ordinary. |
| Daughter of Ashes (not sign... 2001-10-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseAWWWWW!!!! This story is so cute.....I just loved it...There are so few stories with Goku and chibi Goten. |
| RcA 2001-10-13 ch 1, | abuseoooooh, that was sweeeeeet and I loved it! |
| Jeffrey 2001-10-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was very sweet and good. |
| Christina1 2001-10-12 ch 1, | abuseAww...that's so Kawaii. I love reading Goten and Goku moments since they hardly spend time with one another...so kawaii... |
| ??? 2001-10-12 ch 1, anon. | abusefluff, just pure fluff... WRITE SOMETHING SIMILAIR WITH VEGITA IF YOU CAN! PLEASE! |
| JAAnika 2001-10-12 ch 1, | abuseSweet! Goten's so kawaii when he's chibi, and more Kawaii when he's in GT *eyes sparkles* sweet fic! you should make a longer one and use GOku or Bejita better yet...PICCOLO! J/K |