 chibs 2005-11-19 . chapter 1 tee hee. cute |
 Sapphire Gardevoir and Star Enfinity 2004-10-18 . chapter 1Cuteness!^__^ I love Goku-Goten stories, there my fav. charachters! But there is so little of them here It's all Goku and Gohan or Goku and ChiChi. Theres even more Goku and Pan stories and she's beem around a short time. I keep finding stories where Goku ignores him or abuses him and thats not ok. But nice fic. write others! ^o^ |
 Ravenpan 2004-02-16 . chapter 1That was great! *hugs Son family* |
 VegetaGokuLover 2002-11-03 . chapter 1Great job.. you have this uncanny talent for making the best fanfic, out of a situation that's not so exciting. You made every part of this exciting.. and that's awesome. |
 Carrots and Veggies 2002-08-28 . chapter 1AWWWWWWWWWW! That was so kawaii! I just love Gokou and Goten storys! I think there are WAY too many Vegeta/Trunks or Vegeta/Bura stories... -.-'
Oh well...
Great story! Keep up the good work!
Bai! |
 mae7 2002-05-06 . chapter 1I'm back yet AGAIN. Simply loved how you portrayed Goku's irrational fear of the hospital. You have a talent for making something interesting out of the seemingly ordinary. |
 Daughter of Ashes (not signed in) 2001-10-17 . chapter 1 AWWWWW!!!! This story is so cute.....I just loved it...There are so few stories with Goku and chibi Goten. |
 RcA 2001-10-13 . chapter 1oooooh, that was sweeeeeet and I loved it! |
 Jeffrey 2001-10-12 . chapter 1 That was very sweet and good. |
 Christina1 2001-10-12 . chapter 1Aww...that's so Kawaii. I love reading Goten and Goku moments since they hardly spend time with one another...so kawaii... |
 ??? 2001-10-12 . chapter 1 fluff, just pure fluff... WRITE SOMETHING SIMILAIR WITH VEGITA IF YOU CAN! PLEASE! |
 JAAnika 2001-10-12 . chapter 1Sweet! Goten's so kawaii when he's chibi, and more Kawaii when he's in GT *eyes sparkles* sweet fic! you should make a longer one and use GOku or Bejita better yet...PICCOLO! J/K |