|Reviews for Hickeys|
| forNarnia 12/30/10 . chapter 1
laughing... two. words. "Mother Mode"
| BlueberrySpoilz 8/9/10 . chapter 1
| TheOneThatIsAddictedToHPfics 12/17/09 . chapter 1
| radarsada 12/1/09 . chapter 1
AWW! SO CUTE! yay for innocent little lucy! i love you! SO MUCH!
| K.J. Almazan 12/26/08 . chapter 1
this made me laugh like crazy...
| briea22 10/29/08 . chapter 1
What's with all the flaming?
I fucking loved this! So cute.
| cheeseboi 9/21/08 . chapter 1
*laughs* Oh my gosh, I love Lucy's innocence. It's just too cute.
Great work on the story!
| Roxxy 8/11/08 . chapter 1
Lucy Hoped No
One Would Give
Her The Hickeys
If It Meant Setting
Susan On her.
| Macbeth2 8/7/08 . chapter 1
Lucy's innocence and obliviousness is totally adorable. This is so adorable, as well. Great fic!
| Taylor5795 7/22/08 . chapter 1
this was really cute!
| DM-Luvah-S 7/15/08 . chapter 1
that story made me lol at the end... lucy hoped no one would ever give her hickeys, if this was the trouble they caused xD
and yay for protective/motherly!susan
| Queen Red Rum 6/19/08 . chapter 1
This is so very amusing!
What is so funny, is that it is so true.
I recall asking one of my guy friends when I was younger why her had bruises around his neck. He blushed and told me I didn't need to know.
| Grammarsink 6/17/08 . chapter 1
Wow. This was in really poor taste.
| felia-ed-4eva 6/17/08 . chapter 1
Ugh...completely disgusting and totally inapropriate. I suggest you remove this from the site imeadiately. Utterly repulsive and evidently a negative approach on bi couples. And to conclude, this is a disgrace to the C.S. Lewis catagory and has no connection, other than the characters, to the Narnia theme.
| ReviewsGalore 6/17/08 . chapter 1
Story: 8/10. In terms of story, I think that you do very good with this. It is a little cutesy, but it is a nice idea and has a good resolution.
Characters: 7/10. I'm not a huge fan of the babyfing Lucy while making Edmund seem much older, but I guess I can live with it in movieverse. Your characters are all more or less in character, but I think that they could be a little deeper. In terms of how you handle the pairing, you must be doing something right because this ship usually totally squicks me, but it didn't this time.
Creativity: 7.5/10. There is a fair amount of Peter/Edmund fluff out there, but I do think this fic has a nice little idea behind it.
Writing: 8/10. Your writing seems mostly correct and some of your dialogue is very nice, though I wouldn't mind seeing more description in places.
Believability: 6.5/10. You don't make the events unbelievable, but I wish that there was more to tie this fic to the movies/books. I sort of feel like this doesn't have to be Narnia fanfiction - it could be about original characters. In terms of background info and story, that is, the characters are enough like themselves to work.
Overall: 7.5/10. It's a nice little fic with a cute idea, though I'd like a little more to connect it to Narnia.