A great story. Very good.

Jack has brown hair not black and Arabella has brown eyes not hazel other than those mistakes it has potential.

Love it! By the description, (Even though you say the description sucks) the story sounds great. I like how you changed the story slightly from POTC 1 and didn't only change the characters. Keep writing!

dude i love that series!

but its pisses me off that in the book stores i've been goin to they still don't have the 11th book

this is the first Sparrabella fanfic i read well because i didn't know there was any

and i like the twist you put in here.

its going to be a good story i hope

...pirate

Oh! I like this A LOT!

OMG! Ur a Sparrabella shipper? ME TO! Yay! XD! Although I havent read Poseidon's Peak yet! And I keep hearing that Arabella turns out to be Bootstrap's wife, which I dont like!

ARAGH! I need to read that damn book! ... :)

Anyway, I like this story! I can't wait til Pirate-style Will comes in! XD! Update soon!