I like your interpretation of the theme. Nicely written.

I can't stop crying! Great job!

I'd feel really bad if Aang actually died in the show at the end. Poor little guy and he doesn't get the girl in this one. Nice writing though.

Wow.. Even though I pretty much know what was going to come, I did get shivers at that Toph point. Only point of criticism I have is that it may be a little short, but that's my personal taste :-) Great story!

I wrote something along these lines too btw, you can check it if you like ;-).

Really sad, but I still loved it. Great job!