This is a nice story, but you need to work on your grammar and punctuation.

This is good, brought a tear to the eye, in a good way.

Is this referring to a daughter from before the Last Great Time War. Possible mother to Susan etc. That's the only way I can place it.

No criticism intended.

Ciao

That was so sad. Good but sad.

Yet another story that's little more than copied song lyrics. The Doctor doesn't seem like the Doctor at all. How did he end up with a daughter? Who's the mother? That, I think, would make for a more interesting story.

Lovely! One thing the Doctors Ship is spelled TardIs not TardUS. This story was very sweet.