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TVGossipGirlluvs2write
2009-12-19 . chapter 5
hell ya i liked it!
Leth101
2009-10-15 . chapter 5
...Knuckles and Rouge stopped fighting!? The world is ending!
Where is some ShadowxAmy stuff coming in then Sonic getting jealous XP. Still missing some parts but hopefully you'll update eventually!!
Leth101
2009-10-15 . chapter 4
Haha Knuckles getting a little jealous and Shadow needs to go out more...
Leth101
2009-10-15 . chapter 2
Haha god Shadow at least give the a chance and Sonic is suffering xP
Leth101
2009-10-15 . chapter 1
LOL Knuckles is hilarious
The Black Kitsune
2009-06-22 . chapter 5
NO! Must... Read... MORE!
Lovestroyman140
2009-06-07 . chapter 5
nice update soon
Emmychao
2008-08-02 . chapter 5
Oh my goodness... This story is hilarious! Even though there are times when characters seem out of character, to me, that's part of this story's charm. I support ooc-ness when it makes funny situations even funnier. :D

I'm going to watch this story for sure. Now get to writing! (I'm such a hipocrite; I'm being lazy with my stories right now.)
suicuneluvr
2008-08-01 . chapter 5
I wont get mad if u dont put Victoria in your story, i was just suggesting, and like i said, its choice to add her and not mine...so good chapter and i cant wait till the next one...update soon plez! :)
Chaobaby95
2008-07-31 . chapter 5
This chapter was funny XD I liked this part: “Use protection!” Sonic mocked as they walked away." That was funny XD Oh, anfd thanks for the review on my story(:

Update soon!
KRZR24
2008-07-31 . chapter 4
I LOVE THIS STORY! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Catheri
2008-07-30 . chapter 4
Great story so far, but all I can recommend is that you don't rush the SonicxAmy relationship. It needs to build up over time considering Sonic has spent most of his life running away from Amy.
suicuneluvr
2008-07-30 . chapter 4
I cant wait till u wriye about the pool scene...i was wondering...is it ok if u use my fan-character Victoria the Cat to meet Shadow and make them a couple because i really dont like it when Shadow is alone...but i was just wondering if u could do but its up to u...and if u use Victoria in your story here is her description...

Name: Victoria
Species: Cat
Eye color: Blue
Fur color: Yellow/blonde
Clothing: Similar to Blaze's outfit but its the color blue
Friends: Sonic Heroes
Abilities: Control the elements water, fire, dark, and lightning, razor sharp claws, flexable
Gender: Female
Personality: Funny, carring, loves to run alot
Hair: waist length hair
Size: Thin, skinny

And if u use Victoria, i will be happy...but the choice is urs to make but i was only wondering...update soon plez! :)
Chaobaby95
2008-07-30 . chapter 4
YAY You updated!! Aww, I hope you find your dog soon! I liked this chapter! It was very sweet :D
The Authoress of Heartbreak
2008-07-22 . chapter 3
PUH-LEZ KEEP WRITING I WILL DIE IF YOU DONT! I. am. going. to. die. in. my. swivel. chair. if. you. don't. update. soon!
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