I've read this one before and mentioned how I've found them all in my life at different times. Good writing and subject.

This was very powerful, very touching, Dearheart. *sigh* Wow.

Thank you very much for sharing this with us all.

God bless.

This is a nice piece, but it sounds more like an essay than a fanfic.

Interesting and thought-provoking. I disagree whole-heartedly with your ideas about God (well, it isn't what He's telling me, anyway), but nonetheless I enjoyed the ideas this presented. To be honest I thought the message was a little bit simplistic, but you managed to pull it off without sounding childish. In short, very pretty.

A truly beautiful way of putting everything into perspective.

Thanks for writing this! I really enjoyed it-but I also found it challenging, since I tend to switch between Jill and Eustace and am very rarely Lucy. At least God is helping me get that way :D

Beautiful and inspiring.
I'm afraid to say I'm often a bit like Eustace and Susan, though I aspire to be a Lucy. :) It's so good that the Lord has room for all different types of people.

Oh, and I like what you did with Susan, mentioning she remembered Narnia and Aslan evntually. That's what I like to think.

Great job, Dh!

It's well written, and the end is very inspiring to those who share your beliefs. Your goal was to write an explicitly Christian work of Narnia fanfiction, to be enjoyed by other Christians, and you've achieved it very well and stirringly. I know that Lewis would have been proud.

Brilliant question =)

This made me examine myself and realize that I need to try harder to be a Lucy as opposed to the Edmund/Eustace/Susan that I tend to be.
I always love your work and this is just another one of your AMAZING pieces.

:) This gives a happy feeling inside.

Keep Writing!
Shadow

I loved this! thanks for the positive reviews on my story, it means a lot coming from you!

A different idea that is well written! : ) Nice work!
Queen Susan the Gentle, Cair Paravel, Narnia
*Aslan's Blood Never Fails Me*

Well done! Very cleverly put together.

I try to be a sort of Lucy, but usually end up as Eustace. ;)

Great job! I like how you ended this fic by reminding us that one day we will join Aslan, and the Shadowlands will be no more. ;)

In Aslan's Name,

KC

Oh this is so good! I absolutely loved reading it. I think in a way everyone is a bit of all of them, or can be at times. I think in most ways I'm a Lucy (I'm not trying to brag, I mess up all the time) and I really try to be. I say that because I was saved really young and have been raised a Christian and I try to live my life for the Lord. But there's a bit of a Eustace in me, because I've had sins in my life that were like dragon sin, that I needed God's help in pulling off. And it was hard, but of course it's totally been worth it. Excellent job, this was amazing!