to quote the Doctor Fantastic!

that was birlliant you got all of the characters down perfect and tying the two worlds together, flawless! two thumbs up!

I'm loving you story. It's awsome! Update soon, I can't wait to read more.

Completely loving the fic...keep up the good work. Tarnished gold watch, I wonder what that could be? lol. So Dawn is a Time Lord...can you make her Romana or are you gonna keep her as an "original character" Time Lady?

Awesome story so far! I can only wait to see where it leads!

Kinda want to see more. Dawn, apparently, got powerful. Rose is slightly ooc, though. Without exposition there's no reason for the audience to believe she's changed. And explaining stuff like that conversationally doesn't... make sense. I dunno. You don't see that sort of exposition in doctor who. still, i love xovers with bvts.

Hmm interesting take on this, it's a great idea, lovely writing. Update soon!

Great concept! Your characterizations are fantastic. I can't wait to see where you take this.

really good job so far! LOVED the reference to bananas!Characters are pretty good too! keep up the good work, can't wait to read more x