Read this on LJ, and I just had to find you, as a reviewer mentioned that you had it posted here. YOU HAVE TO UPDATE I really like the idea of this, and where it will lead, which I hope is Sarah/Jareth goodness. I'll be on the lookout.

Now *THAT* is a prologue. Who, I can't wait until you update this one!

O.o!! That was totally unexpected. Wow I can't wait to see how this plays out. I really like you writting style.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
~Alanna~

This one's going on alert! :)

Great prologue! it starts out slow but builds, and then at the end Bam! your hooked!

Wow--if you were after a hook to draw readers, you certainly got this one! Your prologue is brief and well-written, setting the stage with necessary background information, without including unneeded details. Definitely adding this one to my alerts!

I'm on this story! I can't wait to see what you have in mind to write to us!^^

You have written a very interesting and pleasant chapter. Have a good day tomorrow. Keep smiling. :-) More please!

You've hooked me with this very promising beginning. Hopefully you'll be merciful about the time you take to keep reeling me in?