For the sake of all things yaoi switch back to short chapters and faster uploads or WHATEVER gets this thing going! That has to be the WORST cliffhanger EVER!

I'm hooked!
I really do wish I had you as an English teacher. This year my teacher is a bitch.
I'm moving to Salem >U

Okay how crappy, cant re review chap 25.. Umm k.

Anyways.. UPDATE! PLEASE I AM DOWN ON MY KNEES BEGGING! PLEASE.

And im glad Zexion got his 3rd pressie :D

This would be a review of chap 25 but it wouldnt let me. :L Damn retards.

Meh.

Luffles, your faithful reader, Danii x

That was way too cute :<3

the poke in the forhead thing really made me laugh xD

And can't wait to read waht will happen next!

Poor Roxas...

This is so incredible! It's one of the most amazing fanfics I've ever read! You're extremely talented, and I can't wait to read more!

I just got into Kingdom Hearts and boy am I glad I found your story! :D

Ah! Cliffhanger. I hope Xemnas gets what's coming to him.

Poor Roxas, struggling through all these hardships. I'm glad he and Axel finally got together- their relationship is adorable in this. I really liked Naminé for the short time she was in the story. Your detailing of Marluxia's brothel and Roxas' job was interesting (if not a little horrific), but I enjoyed how it contrasted with Axel's apartment later.

Oh, and I don't mind the Zemyx at all. ;) Looking forward to the next chapter!

oh my goodness, so BEAUTIFUL.
that's the loveliest, best, most wonderful love scene in the world! dear god, you must realize, if you haven't already, how fantastically awesome it is. i mean these words aren't enough to express how truly perfct it is. THANK YOU.
gah, your cliffhangers leave me oh so hungry for more.

AMAZING chapter. Liek, wow.
This is by far the best fanfic I've ever read.
I'm almost in tears now! I was so happy to finally see Roxas and Axel happy together, but i knew this was bound to happen. CAN'T WAIT 'till the next chapter!!

OH MY GAD!
I KNEW IT! I KNEW SOMETHING LIKE THIS WAS GOING TO HAPPEN
RIGHT AFTER THEY DID IT!
OH MY GAD!
IM SO EFFING EXCITED :D
Hands, Feet, Elbows, Asses DOWN = BEST CHAPTER OF THE WHOLE STORY
and not just cuz of the the lemon ... ;]

Aww such a sweet chapter! I was all ':D yay smex' and then at the end i was all 'D: SHIT!'
I'm so scared for Roxas ;A;

The story is so amazingly epicly epic and intense *_* Absolutely love it~ Hope you continue :D

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your story, is so intense. and that last chapter left me speechless.

just, wow.

much love to you i swear best story ive ever read

cant wait to see more <3

ah I loved these two chapters (especially 25 :P beautifully written... one of the best smut scenes i've ever read) but the cliffhanger... ugh I hope Roxas will be fine...

Great read though, well worth the three month wait!

Nu... ;o; I knew he was going to catch up eventually, but it didn't make it any easier when it did happen! D: I loved this chapter so much though - cruel cliffhanger aside, it made for the best kind of smut - cute, sexy, and heartwarming. <3 Can't wait for the next one. :)

*heart sinks* oh, i knew it was too perfect! dern you Xemnas! i'll kill you myself!

the ending aside, i really want to compliment your sex scene... it was so amazingly well written and just made me say "wow" over and over lol
so descriptive, but it really didn't seem like smut or "lemon" at all, it was like what sex was supposed to be about; showing love between two people. it was very convincing and oh-so sexy ^^

amazing again!