You know if I was that guy, I would take my time about bringing him back. Maybe not do it at all. You know he never liked him anyway. But hold onto it just in case. Maybe sell it to some mob boss leaving Sevarious in the mob's debt or something else of that type.

QueenTatooine

Very interesting and sad at the same time. I made a story that was almost identical to yours but at the time I didn't know about your works. A reader pen named Doppleganger33 told me about his and I decided to check it out. My story makes Sevarius a little more human than yours did but still identical in some aspects. Check it out if you want. But I'm not writing to talk about my stories. I found your story to be... graphic at that last part. You really did a number on ole Sevarius. Samson and Delilah eh? How ironic. you did a really good job with this. I'm really impressed. Keep up the good work.