That was so cute! And the tape idea ... hilarious! o

Aw, yeah. I smiled a lot reading this fic. I have some champion quality gold chocobos myself. And did you really have a chocobo called "22is5?" Weird. Aw well, it beats the names I gave some of my chocobos. And they go a little something like this:
Blue Chocobo: Bluey
Green Chocobo: Greeny
Black Chocobo: Shadow
Gold Chocobo: Golden
Yea, I'm good at names.

Aw that's a good one. really. I like chocobos. Funny.

I know how to write a review. Not all of us are idieots! I spelled it wrong, didn't I? Screw it, and screw you! Whatever!

ROTFL! Thats really good! Nice n' hilariousful!

hahahahaha

*sniff* I LOVED IT. ADORED it. I liked the writing style, the idea, everything. Write more. It's inspiring. Makes me want to write fanfiction too!

LoL. That was funny! Keep on writing!

it was...Different to say the least. But very, VERY hillarious! The whole sucky chocobo thing happened to me at least 4 times. needles to say, TEIOH beat me every time. I loved your fic, and keep up the good work!

*WARRRRRK!*

Hey, it was a bit confusing at first, because I didn't understand how the yellow chocobo that Cloud was riding got in the story, but it was pretty fun once I got past that. Oh, if you was wondering why no one was reading your story its because of the title. It really isn't anything spectacler, but I'm definely not the one to talk about that. My Fanfic in the pokemon section is called Dratini & Me, and the Next Step. So, if you get the chance check it out, and please don't give up on the first part. Bye!

It was a pretty good story. Wish it was animated, so I could see Cloud drag that piece-of-crap chocobo around. In my opinion, though, that's no way to end a story. You should make a second part, making the chocobo weaker than before. That'd be funny.

cute story :)

Pretty good. A few spelling mistakes, but I laughed till' my dad made me stop.

Very cute and original.

I laughed then I laughed some more. This is funny. The bit whereCloud shrinks the chocobo and drags it through the racecourse, followed by the "I want that tape destroyed". Pure Class.