This is really good! Keep it up:)

i absolutly love this it's really original and random... keep writing it though

I really hope bella doesn't have to go back! The baby needs a mother! can't wait for the next update!

I liked it. I actually had time to read it now :) but, yeah the grammer was still bad, but I have seen worse. trust me. like in one of the spots it should have been good, but you put god. yeah, just little things :) Update soon!

update soon!

kittypower

more! more! more!

where are Carlisle and Esme

-chants-Upgrade!Upgrade!Upgrade!Upgrade!-more chanting- xD

Your story is really good, u captured stubborn little Bella, a little OOC with the Riley thing, but it's a fanfic. GO EDWARD! Major coincedence with the mom and cave thing, but I think anyone who has read Twilight and its fanfic is the same )

love it and can't wait for the next chapter

ok...thats...different...in a good way

hurry up and write more!

i havnt got breaking dawn yet and i need more!

yeah...so that is really quite good like i said its different but good

I like the story line, never read a story like it before

:D

thanks for the pm... i was completely confused about the other chapter that you put up haha T_T;

oh i was so confused! i was like what is going on... but i figured you had accidentally posted to the wrong story so no worries lol

I only read the first page so I could see how Bella avoided the brick of death as stated in your summary.