Lol! Oh I love Happiness. I can just see Lethe as she's responding too. I don't know if she'd be all grumbly and testy, or if Jill's name would slip out and surprise her too. Cuteness, "soft, almost comical cat ears."

Lucia and Elincia make a gorgeous pair. Running through the rain and Elincia sighing her name have to be two of my faves.

Haha, and Heather becomes a wuss when faced with a girl she loves huh? Marcia's bit about her commanders' "secret" makes me smile.

Taboo is really well said. It sounds like it could be said so earnestly by any of the characters here. And Believe is an excellent way to end it. It's simple, full of emotion, but open-ended, leaving a feeling of uncertainty as well as hope.

Well done! I'm agreeing with a previous reviewer who said your fic doesn't fall into the "anti-grammar" trap most 50 sentence stories fall into. Each sentence is actually a sentence and not 2 or 3 strung together, but each is also well written, with few extraneous words, and good attention to detail.

There needs to be more Fire Emblem femslash. This was a great series of snapshots. I always giggled when Heather hit on Nephenee, they're my FE OTP, followed by Lucia/Elincia...they are equally squee-worthy couples.

I loved it.
Especially #18 and 28. xD

The sentences are great, despite the awkward combining. Like you said before, there's so much you can do with one sentence.

It makes me happy to see so many of my favorite couples here.

Thank you for writing this. Excellent job, Excellent! xD

I love this!
Complete with all different kinda mixed feelings, angst, death and fluff =]
Keep up the awesome work =D

Awesome~!

I absolutely love these. My favorites were Pain, Sickness and Lies. Much love from me for writing these, they were truly a great read.

Keep up the femslash. I'll be looking out for more from you.

Onward and upward
ASK~

Hm... interesting, you could've made a few on how Jill and Lethe would often fight, probobly, :P

A good work overall =D

... I love you for this. So much. Several of my favourite pairings in there, and well written too.
And you'll be happy to know that I've had a fic ready for a couple of weeks... I guess it's gonna be up, then, if people want it ;)

... write more? :runs:

Ahh, it's been forever since I've spotted some good 'ol FEmslash. There really should be more. I'm thinking about writing some for myself, actually, but, I'm afraid I'll never complete anything beyond a one-shot. Well, anyho...

I thoroughly enjoyed it. Your sentences don't have the whole anti-grammar thing going, which is a plus for me. I loved every sentence with Lucia and Elincia, especially #6, Rain, which could make for some flufftastically romantic plot, uh, ideas. I hated #37, for obvious reasons (No~!! Don't lie to yourself, Elincia, damnit!...unless that line were to be said by someone other than Elincia...which is also possible. :D)

Right, so...Reading those 50 lines was really refreshing. Great stuff. Great writing. Excellent (hah, pun) job~ I hope to read more from you!

Your 'allow anonymous reviews' thingy is disabled, by the way. D: