Excellent, very well done one-shot! Left you more comments at TMs. Keep writing!

Ava

Renaissance at TMs

wow that was really good

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Wow...

That is extremely dark. But I don't think Edward's "monster" is THAT dark. Lol.

Wow.

Amazing. Maybe not for Edward. Maybe for James. That's what I would have thought it would have been if I didn't read the Summary.

Very good, all the same. Just not for Edward. :)

This creepy, but very insightful. Very well done.

wow I love it! its awesome!

This is chilling and wonderful!

This was both creepy and amazing. You caught the other side of Edward- the one he's afraid of. Seeing through Bella's eyes, as we do in the books, it's easy to overlook the fact that Edward is not human, and that he has this very real struggle inside. Very well done.

That was truly excellent! It seems over and over I've read about Edward fighting back the 'monster' as if he too sees two beings inside himself. It's like we always hear from the Moral Edward as you call him. It was so delicious to hear from the Darker Edward. What a well conceived story. And you wrote it very very well!

That's good I like it!

hm. a little on the creepy side, but it's well written.

That was darkly delicious! It made me think of Edward like a slightly less comical version of Gollum, the two different sides of himself making war with one another. I wonder, when Midnight Sun finally is revealed, if we won't see more of this uncomfortable yet very real side of Edward. Well done!