 xxFireWarriorxx 2008-06-18 . chapter 1Whoa, hahaha, I totally did not see that coming! The whole thing a simulation... lol!
I have to say, this whole story was a piece of genius! I loved the way it started, and the description was great too! Excellent dialogue (it flowed wonderfully), and yeah, that rap show-off was awesomely done! *lmao* And the whole breaking the fourth wall and the whole simulation instead of a real event... HAHAHA! It was only some of the jokes that were a bit... interesting, but maybe that's just me. :D
I do hope you decide to write another sequel - I'm really enjoying these!
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