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| Beaumren Trill 2008-07-31 ch 2,  | abuseAWW! I loved this! It made me smile all the way through! The only honest way to heal when you've done something wrong, is to be forgiven! |
| Miko Akako 2008-06-27 ch 2, | abuseVery interesting idea and very well written! -Miko |
| Ryuzaki's Kitten 2008-06-26 ch 2, | abuseThis was very interesting. I like this idea of what happened when Light died. Well done! |
| Necrophiliac1118 2008-06-22 ch 2, | abuseyes, I like. most definately. I have to admit, I'm really not a big fan of OOC Light (and Light was most definitely OOC here), but you made it work out so well that everything just FIT and it was perfect the way it was. I loved this two-shot of yours and I'd love it if you kept on writing the great way you do. -oh btw, those two poems were great additions: they enhanced the story, and instead of putting random breaks (like lines, or a series of letters), you allowed the story to have pauses with poems. I like ^^ |
| ShinigamixGirl 2008-06-19 ch 2, | abuseI enjoyed this fanfic immensely. I'm not sure if this idea is original or not since I just started reading from the Death Note fandom but this was good. For the Hurt/Comfort/General you might wanna change the general to romance since there was romance. I am looking forward to your future fanfics for any fandom I enjoy. ^-^ ~ShinigamixGirl ♥ |
| Amber Jack 2008-06-19 ch 2, | abusei liked it, it was very interesting and differant |
| CaeliaDanan 2008-06-18 ch 1, | abuseWOWOWOWOW!UPDATE SOON!XD |
| Nyeh Creampuff 2008-06-18 ch 1, | abuse:D! Cute idea, I liked it! |