ok now to give you the over all review ^-^
the fact that she's pregnant, and then dies. it's so sad. and then that the HPA blames Combiomorphs, well that just gets me ready to kill them all my self. but know I really want to know what happened next^-^

Awesome chapter! A little sick that he killed a combio for no reason, I'm surprised he didn't fail on purpose, just to save the combio. He seemed a little worked up and about it. It's sad that Emma died though. A least she's alive in his own imagination. Update soon! (Yay, iy didn't take me 'til New Years to read it!!)

Pika!

That's one good story if you ask me!

I don't know how I haven't seen this story before, but I'm glad I read it. It's a pretty unique plot. This is my first combiomorph story that I've read. The backgrounds for the two combios seem so sad and tragic, but Gabe's is really bad. I'm looking forward to part 2. Incidentally, you said he wasn't born with the name Gabriel, so how did he get that name?

wow, that's sad. he had a really bad life, but an interesting one. but now Gabriel shows his true colors, but he won't kill them will he, Emma wont let him im sure..

So ther's Kenny's story! Wow, he had a tough life, abuse and the being a combio for the govt. to being hated by the govt. How does that happen? Anyway, they know that Gabe is a cobio killer now! And then he crashes the car! What'll happen now...update soon!

Pika!

I finally got around to reviewing this. her story was pretty sad, I mean her whole village killed, no murdered thats terrible. but who is this Gabriel guy, im wondering about Emma is she died or something?

Wow...poor Carmen...I wonder what Kenny's story'll be. And the Gardevoir, I wonder what the signifigance of her is. I love the story! It's great! I can't believe the HPA, they're so heartless. And Gabriel is one of them!? I really want to hear that story. I can't wait for the next update!

Pika!