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Reviews For: courages good days

joeyd23
2008-07-09
ch 1,
abuse:(
paulinaghost
2008-06-28
ch 1,
abusecute story. who is bravery?
SunDownUpSide
2008-06-20
ch 1,
abuseOk. Let me put this so I don't sound like a jerk unlike you who sounded like a jerk when you commented on my story.
Work on grammar.
Press enter every time someone is talking
You had fragments here and there.
Make it longer.
That's it. Ok.
Bye.

Sincerely,
SunDownUpSide
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