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crankyXwhenXprovoked
2009-11-30 . chapter 6
omg that was so adorable
dudezchick
2009-10-21 . chapter 6
Aw, this is adorable! I hope you write a sequeal (i dont think that's spelt right) some day...aw.
Kazakun08
2009-10-17 . chapter 6
Yo!! no joke while reading this from start-to-end I could not stop smiling , grining, giggles here and there you name it! it was so heart warming ^_^!! great you, ive been(and still am) readin your stories and man I just love how you portrait Pyro and Iceman , and you writting skills are wickedd yo, keep up the good work cant for ya next update or/and new story =D
Vicki
2009-06-27 . chapter 4
(I am slowly making my way through your Pyro/Iceman fics because they're really good)
"“Hi, I’m John,” still the baby stared. “No. She just doesn’t like me.”" Absolute genius :D
ColossusSolaris
2009-05-08 . chapter 6
I love little Abi shes so cute!! I think you should write more with Iceman and Pyro you write them really well maybe with Abi in it to.
FireFly92
2009-03-06 . chapter 6
AW!

-giggles- 'ohnny! XD Oh, he's never gunna live that one down... -grins evilly at John who's sitting on floor with lighter-

Miss.Sly.
2008-12-01 . chapter 6
Aww. Adorable. I'd love to see more of this.

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WickedSoulx
2008-06-23 . chapter 6
This is friggen cute!
Harlequin Jade
2008-06-22 . chapter 6
Aww! I'm seriously smiling like a lunatic right now...Its so cute! Please tell me you're gonna write more?! This would be so cool if it was longer. I would definitely be a faithful reviewer!
Harlequin Jade
2008-06-22 . chapter 5
That would be such a cute sight to see! I love this chapter!
Harlequin Jade
2008-06-22 . chapter 4
How cute... John is bonding with Marie's Daughter...
Harlequin Jade
2008-06-22 . chapter 3
Yes, I bet Marie put her up to it, too! Haha, poor John...
Harlequin Jade
2008-06-22 . chapter 2
Aw! I bet John feels like crying, too! Lol. I like your idea...I always wondered what would happen if Bobby and whats-her-face had a kid together and then Bobby got together with John...
CodenameCali
2008-06-21 . chapter 6
aw! this was the cutest PostX3 Pyro, I've ever read! Nice job!
Nearly Awake
2008-06-21 . chapter 6
completely adorable... but is this your way of saying that bobby and john are ending up together at the end of "too late"? i wouldn't have thought so, but then john mentioned jamie...

also, i'd love to read more about this psuedo-family-unit, particularly as abi gets older...
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