A little brotherly advice...hmm. Yeah, I guess he needed it. Nothing like a life or death crisis to re-align your priorities. Enjoyed it.

Like the part about keeping a low profile - though I have to agree. I would've thought a cave in the middle of a desert should be pretty low profile.

Whoo -hoo, you go boy. Gotta give that kid points for thinking on his feet.

Good story line so far, need to watch your quote marks in the typing. Love the reparte between Mike and String, it so fit their characters.

Come on Cait, since when have you been shy about telling Hawke how things are? You know he's thick as a door sometimes. Love him just the same, but you know he is.

Nice beginning. Hope Dom gets a chance to enjoy his vaction - goodness knows he could use one.