hey can u send me the lemon 4 this story

I liked it but why did you cut out the lemon?

OMG! That. Was. Amazing! You soo need to write more cuteness like that! X3 ~KYAA!~

FWEH! That was a good story! The link, however, didn't work. Could you send it to me please?

hahaha hilarious. this is actually like, the fifth time i've read cause its really funny. ^^ can i read the edited out part? it said i could ask in my review. :) thanks!
hey, you should have a second chapter, then maybe a third, about different mornings when Deidara wakes up and something happens like this one. but maybe in another one he wakes up and tobis in bed with him cause he (tobi) was really cold or something. lol. XD

hott :)

OMG I love this story. Another great fic!

Very hot! Great story! I really enjoyed reading it!

Oh meh gawd.

OH.MY.GOD!
Awesome!!

lol xD Tobi loves playing, doesn't he? This was too priceless for words X3

Oh and on what character are you basing Tobi on really, Obito or Madara? Just curious cuz I really don't know what Madara's like ^_^; besides evil o_o

Yay it's up, thanks DRD. =)

OMG that was frickin awesome!
that was just... just way too sexy im still blushing! i read the hole thing it was really great i would love to read more TobiDei fics they are just too cute and god damed hot!

W.H.A.T.?!

There's a fan club and no one told me? Damn, I'll be there in a second. XD

Omfg, hawt. Just...yes. Hawtness to the highest degree. Damn. NICE. Lovely work to you and your forum pals. M. Loved that. seme!Tobi ftw, seriously. I lol'd when he said it was awesome. I knew what he meant but I still couldn't help but laugh.

How do you do a critique of a story that was too sexy to watch the grammar or spelling? Oh well. Whatev. Rest assured knowing this was beyond sexy. I don't know if they have an adjective for that, but still.

Can Deidei-chan show Tobi who the real seme is nao plz? =D

All yaoi fans are trying to ignore the whole Tobi=Madara=creepy old guy thing, huh? ^_^ This was...Uh...Well, 'cute' isn't the word...'Fun,' maybe? 'Entertaining?' Those'll do. ;b