great chapter, can't wait for everybody to get back to the leaf.

Awesome update.

good chapter

needs some editing namely this part: The smoke cleared from the collision of the attack and he saw nothing but Donovan’s body in a pool of his own blood.

The rashurkin attacks at the cealluer level the first time he used it there was nothing left but some blood if your going to have donovan revile his secret project do it before he gets hit cause there be nothing left when he gets hit with it

YES it was updated this chap owned lol

YEAH! DIE DONOVAN! and please please please, have naruto Pair up with Kasumi, there are very few perfect matches for him and kasumi is one of them, Tina while she is pretty and such just doesn't quite fit the bill, that and if Naurto breaks kasumi's heart, then her siblings will kill them both, or at least tina and that would be bad. so Pair up Kasumi and Naruto.

maybe a love seen possibly? one of these days? you don't have to be exsplicit if you don't want to but maybe lead us into it so that we can assume that they made love or something, cause well a relationship rarely works out without the basics urges being met. and that is a fact.

I hope he choose Kasumi

Good story so far. You better end it with Naruto choosing Kasumi. Update soon!

Hi my Panther-strife and I was hoping you chould use Xehanort for Naruto's Clone name. Later

yes this is an awsome story beenen readen for like 14hours and 20 mins straight im a slow reader lol

Great fight so far...

So the next one is gonne be megashuein. THE HEAVEN RASENGAN.


Hey, have this scene...


Donovan will transform into a demonic-type, thanks to the curse seal, making him scary...then...when he thinks that victory is his...Naruto and Kasumi will surprise him and nail him hard with the Heaven Rasengan.

Similar to when Naruto nail Kakuzo...watch that fight in Naruto Shippuden Ep. 308. It was a blast, then you'll get the idea.

Their friends, throught the cameras, will see that technique and be awe and shock.


Donovan will die...we rather see him alive...but cripple for life cause of the blast he got from Naruto and Kasumi.


Cant wait to see Naruto and friends return to Konoha where a Megaparty is waiting for him and them. Even Ryu, Hayate, Ayane, Tina and friends will attend and dance and have a good time.


To see Kasumi turn into a Konoha Leaf Ninja, with her own Headband.


About who will get Naruto...i have the big feeling that Naruto will still undecided on who will be his girl. I bet that in the 2 part of the Trylogy will he choose. But that doenst mean that Kasumi and Tina will battle for his affections.


Orochimaru dead? I dont think so. I mean...he's a Sannin, so i think he could have escape in the last minute. And besides...it wouldnt be cool not to have him return to torment the Konoha Ninjas, right?


Hey man...heres a great idea for the Secuel...


Have this enemys return...Ryu old enemys...the Fiends and the Archfiend. But now with a twist...now they'll recruit Konoha own deadly enemys...amount them OROCHIMARU.


Heres a Special Jutsu for Sasuke and Ayane...


ONI HELL BLAST.


By combining Sasuke Amaterasu and Ayane Tengu Flare, their flames will merge into one, then, the'll punch the ground together, and create a mega explotion. The explotion will expande long and high...the face of a evil Oni is seen in the dark/purple flames and incinerate everthing in sight. Not only that, but it will also create a small EMP - (Electric-Magnetic-Pulse) -.

Deadly Jutsu next to Heaven Rasengan.


And as a bonnus...near the end, the ghost of Jiraiya will appeared to Naruto to congratulate him on his victory in saving the world and Kasumi.

Funny scene...when Naruto ask him how's he doing, he'll tell him that great, even more cause of his books...Naruto will be shock and tell this...

-"WHA...you dont meant Jiraiya that..."-

-"Haha thats right kiddo, Its a hit. Number 1 in all the Seretei hahahaha"-

-"Geez, even in the afterlife, you continue to do your reserch Pervy Sage! Naruto will yell angry.

-" What, I am a writer, so yes Naruto, even in the Afterlife, i must continue my work. And besides, everyone loves my books"-


What they dont know...Jiraiya could be a well known Shinigami Captain, a perverted Captain, but one of the best.

Anywho...hope you like it.

And cant wait for the final episodes of this story...as well to see the secuel...SHUEIN.

awesome chapter

Good story, but I have read early chapters of this fic and I am really displeased how Naruto acted just like in the canon: a total dumb idiot all the time. Let me give you an simple advice, if you plan to write a Naruto crossover with any of the fighting game series, Naruto SHOULD be serious {He SHOULD NOT act immature and like a coward}, acted mature, and still have his traits make him unique. Therefore, he should not smile all the time when situations get worse; also, when fighting an opponent, he should not use the JUTSU that insults women in any rate! Most importantly, Naruto should not get hit all the time for any stupid reason! That really gets old and became overrated fast at the same time! In other words, it's really ** me off and make me want to go Kim Kaphwan on somebody's **! Anyway, good chapter.

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Later

great chapter man.keep it up

Whens the next update? because I am LOVING this story!@