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Brimtayne
2008-10-02 . chapter 1
WAHAHAHAHAh!


that is just so out-of-blue/flying-fridge type funny!! (the best kind of funny!)

three thumbs up!! xD


Ps. I really want a T-shirt like that now!!
Amethyst Asheryn
2008-07-09 . chapter 1
Tehe. Love it. *laughing*
The spider thing was funny, even though I'm not sure it was supposed to be. D:
Even the summary is funny! haha. Good job.
Lon
Cynlee
2008-06-22 . chapter 1
That is so weird.

Funny, but weird.

I like the shirt.

Brava.
Sewer Slider
2008-06-21 . chapter 1
But... Donnie is sensitive and writes bee-YEWtiful poetry!!

Ha, loved it! Especially the finger painting, which truly summed up a certain type of fanfic for me. Although it has to be said, I finished the song for Mikey. Loudly. :)

There's always a need for more crackfic like this! *hint hint* Great job!
princessebee
2008-06-19 . chapter 1
Ya know, combined with the godawful poetry, which I assumed were song lyrics, and this opening line:
"Don sighed, put down the pencil, buried his face in his pillow, and sobbed."
I got really confused. I was all like... um... this isn't quite up to her usual standard. Kinda. I scrolled quickly back up and noted the Humour/Parody tags. Phew!

Very funny. I especially giggled at toddler!Mike.

/nitpick/ the correct term is 'sexual reassignment surgery'. /nitpick/
ashdemon
2008-06-19 . chapter 1
Very interesting. Confusing slightly because I have no idea of the age range they're at but still interesting.
SilentMyriad
2008-06-19 . chapter 1
ZOMG. I laughed _so hard_. Thank you kindly for the crack. ^_^
BigfootSighted
2008-06-18 . chapter 1
You have NO idea how hard I tried not to laugh at the whole spider ordeal. It's terrible that you made it angsty as well...so I felt bad for wanting to laugh...but I couldn't help it!

Loved it!
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