Oh, so melancholy. Lovely.

I usually don't like angst. But you've written it in such a way that when I read it I don't have to the sudden urge to slap the character in the face and tell them to get a grip. Because this actually makes sense, actually feels like something that a guy who's going through that would think, rather than someone who's just complaining and ranting and yelling about how much it sucks to be them.
You have a gift for finding exactly the rights words, how to arrange them and exactly which ones to stress to make the greatest impact. Although there's formatting trouble in this fic with all of the 'i' which distracts the reader, which I'm sure you've noticed because it isn't in the other fic I read by you. So I wouldn't mind if you edited it so that the next time I read it, and there will be a next time, I don't get all distracted and notice that I am actually reading something off the internet and not listening in on a trouble man's mind.
So, you get the picture I liked this right?