 Corvus corone 2008-10-06 . chapter 1*heart*
I like the way in which you write, and your style in general. Unfortunately I am terrible at writing reviews, so I can't exactly say very much apart from that. Just let it be said that this is one of those rare Gakuen Alice fics that I actually enjoyed reading. :)
I especially liked the Hotaru one - I felt it was very in character. (Also the crazy fangirl side of me is shouting, "Yay Narumi gets a mention! Yay!")
I know the point of drabbles is to pack as much stuff as you can into a (stupidly) tiny number of words, so I feel kinda stupid saying that I wish you would write longer chapters ... but it's true. You write such nice sentences and it's a bit of a shame that there's so little to read.
So yeah, uh ... keep on writing, please. XD |