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Reviews for: Smiles
minori13
2009-05-27 . chapter 6
Hehe, love it! :D
Corvus corone
2008-10-06 . chapter 1
*heart*

I like the way in which you write, and your style in general. Unfortunately I am terrible at writing reviews, so I can't exactly say very much apart from that. Just let it be said that this is one of those rare Gakuen Alice fics that I actually enjoyed reading. :)

I especially liked the Hotaru one - I felt it was very in character. (Also the crazy fangirl side of me is shouting, "Yay Narumi gets a mention! Yay!")

I know the point of drabbles is to pack as much stuff as you can into a (stupidly) tiny number of words, so I feel kinda stupid saying that I wish you would write longer chapters ... but it's true. You write such nice sentences and it's a bit of a shame that there's so little to read.

So yeah, uh ... keep on writing, please. XD
caramel gracious
2008-10-04 . chapter 7
the youichi one is the best
rawrchelle
2008-06-18 . chapter 2
Waii~~! My favorite one!

I think it's because the last line is so pro. So in character. Or something. ^-^
lisettesakura
2008-06-18 . chapter 6
hahaha..its so funny the way you portray the thoughts of the characters of Gakuen Alice concerning about mikan
aznprincessx65
2008-06-18 . chapter 6
plz go on with the story... it is pretty kool
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