I really love this one. Your fight/action scenes really flow; they're exciting and I can always tell what's happening which is pretty rare, most people make action scenes terribly confusing to follow. I also like your characterisation, I think it's subtle and marvellous, basically ^~^ I hope you write more for this, I can't wait to read it!

YOU ARE KIDDING , NE? why you cut this? it`s so perfect AND you didn`t UPDATE in YEAR, WHY ? I HOPE YOU WILL UPDATE SO SOON

This is really getting interesting. I do hope you decide to continue it. Thank you for sharing.

I WANT TO KILL YOU. WHY YOU CUT THIS? AND WHEN DO YOU WANT TO CONTINUE? I HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON

you are horrible i hate you. why you don`t continue this? it`s took long time. hurry for next chapter

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Amazings!!
I liked it!
Awesome's!
*hem* (looks nervously) Do you mind if I try and write a short story that spins off of this... a bit?
I will give you full credit for your part and giving me the idea!
Promise's!
(And it will probably take me forever to write since I am the slowest writer in the world).
But I really do like this story!
-hey yall is getting ideas ideas ideas

loved it! <3 hope you update soon~

Definitely love! Five stars for originality, and two thumbs up for suspense! Only three chapters done and I'm already sucked in! Goodness, I hope you update, I can't wait to read more! How many more exclamation points can incorporate into my review? Let's find out!

Whoo. Truly, truly a wondeful story. I wouldn't expect anything else considering your precious fics. ;) I knew it was going to happen, I knew Iruka was going to get hurt, but I still couldn't help but bite my lip through most of chapter three. D:

Ah! Just have to comment on the cuteness that is Iruka! He's so shy and innocent (behind innocent eyes almost always lays a prankster). I've always imagined Iruka using water-based attacks (I wonder why? *eye roll*). Water-clone Jutsu is usually what I expect out of him rather than Shadow-clone... I really do live in my own little world. ^0^

Also, loved your idea for Iruka's bloodline limit. Very original! :)

Thanks for posting! Hope to see an update in the near future!

Ah totally love this fanfic. HAve you abandoned it? please update soon, i'd really like to know what kakashi thought to accomplish by looking at iruka;'s scar.

ah, u have to keep going!! how can u just leav it like that *sniffles* i wana know what happens!!?? *begs*

i love this i really want to know what happens and while im at it i loved touchstone. im planning on reading alot of your work cause i like your style.
i send my love of kakairu,
rikari moshima

How dare he attack after the match was over!! Is that attack the reason Iruka's never shown that ability as an adult? His sensei was Ibiki? Good work!

Oh! I love it!
Please continue with it soon! XD

update soon plz! i really like where u are going with this!

I love it ! I want know more about this young team !