 tatterdemalion 2008-06-19 . chapter 1Oh my goodness, this is such a good story! I really liked how you built up the information that this was Ruby who was pretending to by Jenny Doe, and I really liked how the title fit in - how the Burkowskis assumed she was a victim, when really it was the other way around. I love your style of writing, it sends chills up my spine sometimes :D |