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| Shiona Acitiu 2008-09-29 ch 8,  | abuseHoly SHIT! |
| CoOkiiee Jar 2008-09-29 ch 8, anon. | abuseOmgg! Dat wOz sO goOd! Update soOn yee x |
| lunasong13 2008-09-27 ch 8, | abuseyay! it's really good! keep writing! |
| rosedreamer101 2008-09-26 ch 8, | abusewow, please update! |
| misstruthfully 2008-09-26 ch 8, | abuseI hate Veronica and Monica..they sure are bitches... How I wish they go to hell... or maybe die after the wedding.. That sure is fun.. -evil laugh- oh by the way sorry for blabbing.. gomen..:) like this chapter.. Syaoran really is falling for Sakura.. haha Hope Sakura will break up with William...or maybe William will break up with Sakura.. that will hurt Sakura..:( oh well... hope you update soon.. and keep up the good work.. ja-ne |
| rondallagurl 2008-09-26 ch 8, | abuseWell, umm, to be honest, i was a but bothered, only a BIT okay? Anyway, nice chapter, I hope you update soon! UPDATE SOON!! |
| Crazy heart 2008-09-26 ch 8, | abuse"Happy time"! xD.. I hope it's not what I'm thinking it is...! Lol, nice but I feel bad for Syaoran!I'm gonna tell you once and for last you better not have Syaoran dump Sakure for Monica..if you do...I'll hate you forever. Wait, you dont care about that, how about, please dont... pretty please...!Syaoran's not that bad a person!! :( |
| MikoKagome1113 2008-09-25 ch 5, | abuseVery mysterious! I cant wait for Shaoran and Sakura to meet. ~Miko |
| MikoKagome1113 2008-09-25 ch 4, | abuseEh, Im kind of unclear about the main point of the story. Obviously its about Sakura and Shoaran, but is that just the main idea or is there some odd twist to it? lol. Just wondering. ~Miko |
| MikoKagome1113 2008-09-25 ch 3, | abuseoi...Fujitaka getting married? I just can't see it. He seems like the type of man that stays single his entire life because he still believes, even if she is dead, that he is married to Nadeshiko. I hope this doesn't turn into some Cinderella story. ~Miko |
| poems2songs 2008-09-25 ch 8, | abuseinteresting story... lots of drama... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you... |
| MikoKagome1113 2008-09-25 ch 2, | abuseI liked this chapter much more. IOt left a lot of open plot points and future changes that might be needed for the story. Very well crafted. ~Miko |
| MikoKagome1113 2008-09-25 ch 1, | abuseGood introduction. I do think some of the details you added in here, such as Tomoyo being Sakura's cousin, or the feud between Fujitaka and Sonomi, could have been dragged out for far longer then the first chapter. It seemed rushed. ~Miko |
| chainedheart999 2008-09-25 ch 8, | abuseWhen I read the warning, I think that the story will have a sexual scene >.< I am surprised!^^ Nah, it is still okay^^ Please upload soon. I hope Sakura can quickly realize what Willian are doing... and for Syaoran, I hope he can quickly accept the reality^^ |
| winterkaguya 2008-09-25 ch 8, | abuseoh man...what a drag...i get so annoyed at monica and veronica and i can't wait to see all that facade they pull come crumbling down...and i wonder what happened to sakura and syaoran that caused syaoran to dump sakura and get involved with that stupid wench monica?? urrgh...i feel the creeps crawling all over me!! nice chapter and poor william...to be honest, i dunno where to put him exactly and i don't even know if he really likes her or not...but then again...if anybody in the university were to find out, both of them would be in trouble, ne?? update soon ya! |