Uhm HOWDY!

i was just wondering wether or not draco would be on top, cause i ant read draco bottom stories..and ive wanted to read this for some times.

Please let me know soon.

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Glam

I am happy hello to your story you have no idea with each chapter and suffered and gosado, sinplemente wonderful ^ ^ I am very pleased to have found and encouraged to read it because you will not tell anything about English uses a translator to read the story, I commented that was very good but in my opinion is escelente each chapter and the last I awoke ... The last character for which his departure from Damien cry from that appeared in the story caught my attention and then as it develops sinplemente is an incredible character and his tragic end inportancia TT-TT
I am much charm your story and I sincerely hope you to write more stories ^^

great story. I'm glad that there is going to a sequel and that you'r going to keep on going. This story is well written and there is a good you're right thoughin getting a beta because, no offence or anything, but your spelling and grammar sorta sucks. Anyway, well articulated and thoroughly enjoyable!

CONGRATULATIONS!

Lenny13

This story has so captivated me for the last 3 days. Was hard having to go to work and not go onto the next chapter. You are an amazing writer. Although it would have been easier read, had you used a beta.

Awesome job!! Cannot wait to now read your next story the last prophet!

That was...completely stunning. Although in the earlier chapters I saw a few spelling errors (very very few, and far in between) they were small and insignificant enough to skip over and read on merrily.

I'm disappointed to see how very few reviews it got (although it may just be because you just put it back up) since it was a work of such...creativity and wow. Uh...what else... (I had a mental list of what I wanted to say, and sadly, that list is probably in an odd corner somewhere)

Oh! This has obviously been a very satisfying read for me (I will be rereading this for years, haha) and I don't think I've ever taken quite a liking for a story with it's own world like this before(after all, you came up with basically everything about the elves and such)
Simply marvelous. Really.

Oh, but I DID have some questions because there are a few things that...didn't quite..add up (or I read it wrong or something) but..
Well, it was mentioned earlier on (much much earlier) that Oliver and his sister were human because his mother was a witch... and I realize that the elven bonded change with their bond (because we see it with Harry also) so is that implying that they reach immortality? Because it was mentioned later on that Oliver was at least a thousand years old... but then Flamel says that he created the Philosophers' Stone for the humans bonded to elves so that they won't have to suffer mortality while their mate does not. So that creates a ...paradox(?) or something... unless Flamel created the Stone BEFORE Oliver showed up...
Anywho, I was also wondering about the elven immortality thing also, because that was also mentioned, but I was wondering if it was like that of the elves in Lord of the Rings?(immortal if left alone, but can be killed) Because Zasuan died...and I'm just confusing myself even more now.

Anyhow, that's all I can remember that I wanted to ask you about.
But thank you for having shared this beautiful story you created with the rest of us. It's truly...a sight to behold. (56 chapters!) And it's really on a par of it's own with the amount of creativity you put into this. Well, yah. I think that's it.

O.O how is it that it gets better and better?

OMG!
That's all i can say...

*tears*
thas was so sad...I can't believe they are dead!!
Now I am dying to know: Is that a real song?
What's it called?
I wish i'd know

I'll keep reading xD

LOL

HAHAHAHAHHAA
Salazar swering...xD just killed me...xD

:D I loved Chronicle 1!

It was awesome!! tnk goodness i foun this xD
I was going mad with nothing good to read!!

I am gonna get going!!
Kisses
Bella

this story is a wonder...I love every moment while reading this. Thanks for sharing this great story! The ending was a bit confusing, but after the explanation i understand it. Happy ending...

yes it was totaly cool i loved it til the fith that just conpuzzeled me

Six chapter in and I gotta ask, Is Harry in this story. I think that so far he's had what THREE SENTENCES? Not like that, i'm giving this two more chapters, no harry, then no me. END OF STORY.

i'm getting a lot of mixed reviews... i dunno if this is good or bad... thank you to all the people who suffered through it and made it to the end.. i am glad some of you enjoyed it. i know there are many (thousand) misuses of commas but please try to look past it and enjoy the story.. i pulled off an old archive file when i reposted it and some of the grammar didn't translate into the new font. i tried fixing it, but looks like i failed in that regard.

please remember that i posted this as a precursor for my new story please be sure to check that out... many thanks

DM

...wow.
It story is awesome @.@
I honestly think this story is better than the real harry potter!
I usually don't read fan fictions past the 6th chapter because I'd lose interest but this...i didn't sleep at all last night because i was so focused on this story.