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poppaea_sabina
2009-07-31 . chapter 6
Where is everybody from Gibbs's team? Weren't they invited? I was looking forward to Tony's teasing.

BTW, abstinence has an impressive failure rate!
20fourseven
2009-06-24 . chapter 6
Hilarious! Loved the 'Jellyfish' line. Poor Mcgee and his videotaping.
Great job, well done, the whole story was very funny.

TimBo.
star jelly
2009-04-25 . chapter 6
That was the funniest story I have ever read!
I LOVED IT!!
I thought the first chapter was funny, and then it just kept getting better and better!
Once again great story!!
Smackalicious
2008-07-12 . chapter 3
I didn't even realize Michelle was in the scene until that last line. Suddenly I'm thinking about that spoiler you posted. Heh. It's gonna be a fun season. Anyway. Loved it, as usual. I totally believe the whole "class system based off how many grandchildren you have." Oh yeah, I can see that.
Smackalicious
2008-06-28 . chapter 2
Oh, cute. I love how young and nervous and . . . lusty they are. Ha. "Do you love me?" "Sure." Not quite the response I would be looking for, but I suppose it works for them. So so so in character. You're amazing for that.
Fullmetal Pipsqueek
2008-06-24 . chapter 5
Hilarious! I missed three phone calls I was laughing so hard.
JMK758
2008-06-22 . chapter 3
I so LOVE Ducky, he can be so sardonic and down to earth at the same time. More Ducky! More Ducky! This was definitely a LOL chapter!
My impression, though, is that Jimmy and Ducky were alone. Did Michelle come through the door just in time?
Smackalicious
2008-06-22 . chapter 1
Haha, I love that Palmer decided to "empathize with his patient." :p Hilarious. That's so something he would do, too. Very nicely done thus far, as always.
jojocat
2008-06-22 . chapter 6
The last few paragraphs were a hoot! I cannot imagine something like that happening at a wedding and I have been to my fair share as a guest and a bridal attendant. The hoop flipping up was the best line in the whole story. Nice work.
anymousie
2008-06-22 . chapter 6
amazing!
i couldn't stop laughing the whole time!
M E Wofford
2008-06-22 . chapter 6
Just an hysterical story.

It made me laugh all the way through it.

And what a wedding!
M E Wofford
2008-06-22 . chapter 5
This is an hysterical chapter!

Really good story.
Gilari
2008-06-22 . chapter 5
Poor Palmer is in way over his head! "Jellyfish Master- may the fish be with you" was priceless, as was the intonation that Ducky's mother might try to kill Jimmy :-) Another great chapter!
Enthusiastic Fish
2008-06-21 . chapter 4
I don't remember if I mentioned it before, but I love the reconstruction of the pig...and the chicken feet. I had the Meat Puzzle in my head the whole time. :)
BizzyLizzy
2008-06-21 . chapter 4
This is brilliant - I loved Jimmy's actions at dinner! Can't wait to see what happens next.
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