Loved it. Nice work

Lol, I really enjoyed this! I had a hard time picturing Hwoa screaming girlishly, but I enjoyed it all nevertheless!

Happy Writing!

I really like it,so much I can't choose a fave bit, I loved most. I just went on a roller coaster for the first time so I can sympathise, but I didn't really like it soo...

Sorry for prattling on about something irrelavent to your fic, here goes the review

Well written. I loved how you portreyed the characters(except Jin, slightly) and thought it was really nice and funny.

Happy Writing

Dil

That was awesome,are you gonna make this into a fic?

This is great! I loved every bit of it. Really nice characterizations, a fun setting, and excellent narration, accompanied by entertaining banter, amounted to a thoroughly pleasant story.

Some phrases I particularly appreciated were these right in the beginning:

"Ling Xiaoyu. Complete with Panda and pigtails."

"a one-girl fanclub for Jin Kazama"

"What kind of gentleman would I be if I invite a lady out and don’t even drive?"

This must be my lucky day; I'm running into great fics everywhere I turn. I'm not shy to praise when the opportunity to do so comes along. Thanks for writing this!