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Reviews For: Family Secret Pt 2
iCarlyonlybaby21 2008-11-25 . chapter 1
Man Nature you have great passtion and discription in your writing that what makes you a better writer and one of my faves keep up the good work.
jewelofmyeye 2008-07-19 . chapter 1
This story is awesome!
FredandGeorgetwinsoftheC.O.C.A 2008-06-25 . chapter 1
Gag me, Freddie was so romantic that I'm in love with him now! I can't really see him helping out other guys while in the middle of his own date, nor can I see Mrs. Benson and Carly following them to spy. I liked Spencer, he was just serious yet typecast enough to work. Freddie's various compliments and pick-up-type lines were truly great; the day I get a boyfriend that says even half of that, I'll beg to marry him. Sam is one lucky girl!
KT.the.Crazy 2008-06-23 . chapter 1
I really liked this story! It was well done, and not too cheesy. I think this story could work as the part two for your other stories, you just have to crop the whole Carly & Mrs. Benson thing. Excellent job!
ColorsOfTheSky101 2008-06-19 . chapter 1
I absolutely loved this. It was incredible, and I expected nothing less than that :D
Ha, I love that Carly and her new mom were spying!
james is my boi 2008-06-19 . chapter 1
i love it! awesome!
LunaLoonyLongbottom 2008-06-19 . chapter 1
lol I loved it(it's luna) and i was told why it took you along time to write this. I'm sorry if my friends bugged you at all.
4everyoung 2008-06-19 . chapter 1
I loved it, it was so fluffy and gooey, but it was enjoyable kind of gooey. Wow so the tech geek is a romantic fool,who knew? I would love a guy to say those sweet, romantic things to me and I thought it was cute that Freddie was so nervous before the date and about kissing Sam. Good for Carly to stand up to that snob.
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