Excellent story. I really admire the skill with which you've composed this piece.

I've yet to find a Daphne/Harry fic i like more. Thank you so much for sharing this.

Nicely done story, and I appreciated the post-epilogue continuation as well. I really enjoy it when authors go for some of the less-common pairings, and getting Harry some help in exploring his Slytherin side is a good thing. Also, having Snap "spoil" while on ice was a neat solution to that issue. Looking forward to seeing what else you have out here. Thanks for a fun read!

I wonderful story though I am little sad one Luna Lovegood didn't really make an appearance into the storyline until the last chapter. I can't not help wonder if you might make a Harry X Luna story in the future though I know you mostly interested in the Harry x Ginny pairing. I am little dissappointed Winky and Dobby seemed to dissappear after be around early on. Whelp good luck to you in any of your future works if there are any.

I like all your stories, one of the reasons being that most of them are Harry/Ginny. But I also read 'Kidnapped' and have now, finally, started reading this one. I like it so far.

I am confused about one thing:

When H and D agree on her teaching him Occlumency and he worries about Snape finding out about the Malfoy incident, it seems that there should be 3 days before the next Defence lesson. But the next morning...

"So what do we do?" Ron asked as they continued walking to their Defence class.

Did I misunderstand something there?

nice story

A very well thought out alternate view of this world. One of the better views of Harry, and his friends, (at least those did not follow the cannon pairings and events of the last couple of books).

I am saddened by your announcement not to be writing any more in this AU, but will respect it and not plead. (However, I might try my hand at writing a side story using yours as a basis sometime, with your permission and approval of course).

All in all, excellent work of the story teller's art.

Excellent work

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I was doing random webs earches for specific pairings when I did a potter/greengrass search and found this one. I realize its been months since it was done but I just wanted to add that I found it to be a great story, if a bit hurried on harry beating voldemort. That part bugged me, mainly because you had him kick voldemorts ** mind to mind and dominate him just on pure will. Personally, I would have gone with replacing snapes strengthening cordials with the draught of living death, but thats just me. :p Otherwise, great story, very well written, and now im off to scan your other works and see if I like any others!

I really enjoyed this story. The only problem I had was towards the end when harry just did what daphne wanted him to do. I can see him being whipped, but it was like everything he chose to do was her idea...

i really enjoyed this story and have become a sucker for this couple. thanks for the read Dudtheman

ooh i liked that good ending

good chapter

ooh i likie least nev and hermione are understanding he he

rons a tit i like dthat and if hary and dpah are engaged bet molly wont be impressed im sure she wnated harry fora son inlaw

i like this dunno why jk finished it how she did so anticlimatic