this has been a very good story.

(i nearly accidentally read the epilogue at the end of chapter 4, that would have been a disaster :) )

A comment on the Mary Sue thing: Daphne herself is not one of those girls, because she doesn't bounce her perky self into control of everything, rescue everyone, snag the hero, etc. However, the idea and potions she hands over are a plot contrivance - by definition, something introduced to get something to happen that might have been difficult to make work otherwise. Considering that the Draught of the Living Death already existed, it is not too implausible to have an Imperius Draught, and the plan is simple enough (though crazy) to be thought up by a teenager, it is not an unbelievable contrivance merely noticeable. Actually, it works better to have the plan thought up by Daphne because it is out of character for the main HP characters since they are too goody two-shoe (unless it comes to casting Unforgivables in DH).

I think I can see what's going to happen next chapter, so I wanted to post before then. This is very good, and I'm itching to see what you do with Snape now that he's stuck with Draco's task. I do feel let down however that you used the same timeline for getting the memory after having Daphne talk to Harry and help him plan about it. Does having someone support him and point a useful way not affect his thinking at all?

good ending. sweet and fully of fluff for his family.

Yay for Harry getting some Slytherin love! I absolutely loved your story...from the plot to the characterization...everything was just awesome. Thanks for the read.

i loved it and it was amazing!

Nice one. I like the fact, that you made them realize, that getting rid of the death eaters does not solve the real problem.

Now that's been a good story :D

This is not the first Harry/Daphne fanfiction I've read, and I do hope it's not the last, either. It's one of my favourite ships.

The story is very intriguing and I dare say the way Voldemort is finished is unique in the world of fanfiction. As is the way Snape goes, which is slightly out of character for Harry, if he's not able to hold a grudge against the Dursleys. However, I liked the way you worked your characters. very good job!

I really like this story and the addition sure adds to the quality and entertaining value of the read.

Lets see harry with Luna in the future and see how she spins harry in his time at Hogwarts!

BTW Thanks for NOT placing Ron & Hermione together! That pairing still mystifies me!

dennisud

Oh loved this story!

still one of my top 3 favorite fics on this site, even after reading it half a dozen times.

good story

I enjoyed this story. Thank you for taking the time to write it.

impressive length.

I like that there's an Epilouge in chapter 4 yet it continues for 4 more chapters. Perhaps you should remedy that by updating chapter 4.

I reckon sometimes the best stories are after Voldemort is taken care of. I enjoyed these past 4 chapters very much. The only thing I found unbelievable was Ron and Harry. Most people would sacrifice an enormous amount rather than appear to be doing what someone else preaches at them. In other words, I don't believe Ron would have stayed around to apologise. Aside from that point, (which probably says more about my own cynicism than your writing,) very well done.