That was definitely packed with a lot of thoughts and realizations on the part of Kit (and Nita too).

I'm impressed with your level of detail and the amount of description you use to get into Kit's head (I think that doesn't happen enough in fan fics- most people do fan fics from Nita's POV because that's canon).

I look forward to seeing the companion to this (I'm doing my own sequel to a YW series I'm working on right now that's also going to begin after AWOM comes out.

Dai,

-Don "QuixoticQuest" =)

good job
a well written meaningful not too sappy fic :D

I like this quote: "After the Moon, Mars is the next logical step."

That is so significant- and in more ways than one! : )

Good story, though. I was hoping Nita would lean her head on Kit's shoulder- and she did! The power of wishful thinking. I can just see them sitting together like that. So cute. *sigh* They really need to get together. Seriously!

On a more cheerful note: can't wait until AWOM comes out- got the date on my calendar! SO EXCITED!

nice

AH! That had some fluff.