I don't think is that much of a "bad" character, I mean yes bad as in evil but not bad as in poorly written. It's true that pure evil characters are sometimes overused and are generally less well developed, but he does serve the purpose to create a contrast for Mojo and bring some extra danger into their lives so I think there is a good reason for him in the story. Cliffhanger :o looking forward to the next chapter!

Good chapter. Though it's gonna drive nuts to not know what happened to Mojo and Blossom.

Hey, Mark isn't bad for an OC. There are people likae him in real life that just do horrible things and don't feel bad about it. There isn't anything that complex to them except that they are jerks. Mark fits the bill and you did a good job creating him. As the creator, you can feel free to kill him.

HOLY SHIT CLIFFHANGER--

You'd better get the next chapter up soon, because I need to know if Mojo's okay, if Blossom's okay, how they feel about each other now (romancing time now yes?!), just AUGH. You are an evil, evil person, but also an awesome writer with an awesome story here. XD

NO! A CLIFFHANGER! WHY??!! *dies*

Okay, let's be serious: I loved the chapter. Didn't catch any grammar mistakes so there'll be no nitpicking from me today ;D

I shall patiently wait for the next chapter :D

Wtf I'm actually reviewing at this time? Dear god.

Anyway, I was totally freaking out when I found the new chapter and I have to say, your writing ability (and more importantly, the way you write the characters) just never fails. Even your OC is epic. AND A FUCKING CLIFFHANGER AT THE END OH YOU DEVIL.

Oh my god. I cannot wait until the next update. You're making the world a better place :')

Im really happy i started to kiss the computer screen when i found this fanfiction and im gonna read it.. tomorrow

This really good and IC. I like it.

I recently discovered this fic and just couldn't stop reading it. The whole thing is so well written and in character. I also appreciate how long of a time frame is actually passing in this story. This pairing isn't something I can imagine happening overnight and it's nice to see the build up to it.

Anyway, this chapter was excellent. Mojo and Blossom are bonding! Also, for some strange reason I'm intrigued by idea of Blossom studying martial arts. Oh, and the plastic bag line had me cracking up. That would be quite a way to finally kill one of the Powerpuff girls after years of attempting to do so with advanced machines!

I'm sorry to say this but i hate you. I.hate.you. And you know why i hate you? Because, thanks to you, i can't go to sleep. And you know why i can't go to sleep? BECAUSE I CAN'T STOP WISHING I HAD A NEXT CHAPTER TO READ! As mojo jojo would say, Curse you! Curse you for leaving me with this horribly strong need to know what's gonna happen next!

As an author myself, i know it can be hard to update when ,i quote, you "just don't give a fuck." but christ, this is killing me. This is an awesome story and i can only ask you not to take too long to update...please... I don't want to die...

This is great. I think the damsel in distress thing works for Blossom in this chapter since she doesn't have her powers. You probally could get two hundred reviews.

Excellent chapter! The whole restaurant sequence was great, not only the whole overtone of "scandal", but also the little things, from Mojo and Blossom arguing over the tip to the subtle but (I assume) necessary continuation of Mark Clayton's part in the story. And of course I need not emphasize just how great that hug at the end was. XD

Thank You so much for doing this pairing!! I love MojoXBlossom. :D Its cute how Mojo begrudgingly cares for Blossom. Please update soon!!

So this is rather... interesting. Honestly, I'm new to the whole PPG fandom. This was the second PPG fic I've read (the first being Love's something Charity by Commander) but it's the first Mojo/Blossom. Really, I never thought the pairing would exist, considering he's a monkey and all. Though, I'm a sucker for the good girl/bad guy pairing, no matter who it is. I look forward to reading the next chapter!

Another great chapter, of course. :) I especially like when you had Blossom realize how tough it was comparatively for people who didn't have powers, and how much normal people must have suffered at her beatings. That's not something I would have thought of either, actually, but it stands to reason that the PPGs probably don't consider the hits they throw to be as damaging as they actually are.

Blossom's damsel-in-distress moment worked fine, by the way. Like you said, she didn't have her powers, and she still fought back regardless.

Chapter fourteen soon? (puppy dog eyes) XD