Dude great story. I'm loving the quips about the Jonas Brothers and Cyrus (gags as well) Keep up the good work.

i'm not going to scream at you not to delete this because that is your choice but i don't think it was bad i quite liked it ;)
thanks for writin :D

I really wish you wouldnt stop this story. I've been following it for a while. I know how it feels to hate your own writing, but I think you should stick this one out and try to continue the story.
misty

YAY! I am excited that you are going to rewrite this.
Meg

Aw, I really liked this story. Please don't delete it!

wow i love this.

IMMA BIT EXCITED SO YOU BETTER STICK WITH THIS ONE! : ) i like exclamation points : )

DONT! i like this story : )...i've waited forever and a day for you to update... : ( your not as bad as you think...you only dissapointed me by waiting a year to update...but that happens... i'll do the poll thingy i guess... BE HAPPY ITZ NOT THE END OF THE WORLD...yet : ) lol imma bit hyper lol

I can't believe you're deleting this story! I wanted to find out what happens so badly! *sigh* And don't put yourself down like that. I think you're a GREAT writer! I don't know if this means much but I'm being honest when I say I really enjoy reading your work.
I'm excited to find out what happens in Night Rendezvous! I just hope it's not Jacob...haha. Well I wish you luck with your new story! I'll be waiting to read it!

if you write best in
a "depressing" genre
(sry if i spelled that wrong...)
anywho
if you write best in that genre
then you should try to write about
when edward left
and have bella not go see jacob
or something
and have her either
a) cutting
b) starving herself
c) eating alot and then puking
i hope this helps
please let me know when you post anything
new or if you have any stories besides
this one
im going to do a search for your new story
i would appreciate it if you read and review mine
ive changed some of the things in the story
and added to it but i had a trial of word and
the trial stopped and i cant get my story out of word
:(
if you want to read it and you like the plot
let me know and ill see if i can buy word
~arinamarie

how could you say your an awful
writter?
your a great writter!
never ever tell yourself your bad!
this story is great!
please let me know when you post your next
story :)
your an awesome writter
~arinamarie

i really wish you wouldn't delete this story! :(
i used to do gymnastics, but gave it up for dancing, because i simply could not keep up with the two as i progressed to higher levels, and we especially couldnt afford it, having two brothers at home as well as me (all of us invovled in various sports) so it was really nice to read about the world of gymnastics that i was missing out on.
secondly, i really liked your style of writing! you never disapointed me at all, i liked to reread this story, waiting for you to update. i think that you shouldnt give up on the story, maybe finish it, trying to improve your writing the best you can, then you can visually see the improvement you have made.
anyways, i hope you have the best of luck in your future writing, and dont give up! you've got solid skill, dont waste it.

always reading,
Leona

hello, as you well know, we are the double personalities of your friend Emily. Slapshot is the funny one and Gertrude is the loving, responsible one.

Anyway, I ROCK! I love that you've taken my idea and you're running with it. I can't wait to read the story. =) Love you Bubbles and Hydie!

- Slapshot and Gertrude

I really wish u wouldn't delete this. I actually could relate to it. Oh well...good job writing it though. I wish you luck in the future!

I'm sad that you're giving up on the story. It really was a good story, well so far.
I don't really have any ideas on what kind of story you should write next. Sorry. :(