I heart this story!! Please please please update soon! :)

great job on the storyline! it is just so well-written and believable. i'm so glad that they are finally getting a move on in their relationship beyond just teammates. please update soon! it's been like 3 months since you last updated. please don't make us readers wait too much longer! -gives authoress big puppydog eyes- pwease...

I love this story! Please update before 2010!

i loved it so much! i cant wait til the next chap. i ddnt see any mistakes whatsoever! impressiveness.

I love it so far! perfectly writen for the mood n' plot. ive only read 2 chaps n i havnt seen one mistake so i dnt have much 2 review on, but here ya go!

Loves,
Ashlie, 'cause that's what her parents decided to name her.

rofl no ** ghost story XD

please write
im sure that i will die if u dont

Great chapter. Looking forward to the next two.

Hi I'm sorry I haven't R&R but I haven't any internet so again I'm very sorry. I hope they make it into border by morning and they can put this mission behind them.

AMAZING!
I absolutely LOVE this story ;D
Fo sho.
And I really can't wait for an update.
It's so addictiong ^^
Oi!
No body better complain about lack of citrus.
You just had a lemon [thank you].
X3

LOL ^.^ I needed that laugh! Defeated by a mud puddle and the great and terrible army afraid of a ghost in a valley, love it! Can’t wait to see what happens next!

So Sakura is gonna be Sasuke's toy huh... That won't sit too well once Sakura figures out his game.. if she ever does

Oh.

I like that. XD

ghost, eh? Nice twist, with a foolhardy sergeant and Sasuke and Sakura.

Teehee, Sakura's covered in mud! Definitely a humorous spot XD

Lol, that was nice :D But I would have liked it longer.. I guess I'm just going to have to hope for a longer one later on in the story? :P

This is promising. I like your writing style, and I'm looking forward to read all the other chapters :D