Reviews for Death and Rebirth

GillyLee12
2008-06-20
ch 1,

abuseIf Scott is the eldest and John the middle one, then who is the eldest who got 'showered' when Scott is killed? And speaking as one who has killed all Tracys too, you ought to make sure you do so without any typos (Killing off Tracys is bad enough as it is, grin.)
Also, if they are shot down and the remains of the plane are found, why is Lady Penelope still trying to find them?

siouxsmn
2008-06-20
ch 1,

abuseKate, I just have one request. Could you please add a "Remember to Breathe" warning at the beginning of your chapters? I was almost turning blue by the time I got to the end of the chapter ;-) Great start to the story! But after reading the section after the flashback I'm confused. . .were they shot down or did the plane have engine trouble and land? Can't wait to read more and see if my ideas of where you are going is true?

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