 Trinity Fenton-Phantom 2009-12-23 . chapter 1Great story. I like how Naruto heard and felt him in the end. |
 Alda MN 2009-07-24 . chapter 1This is so sad, I hope this wasn't how Naruto was treated when he was little. He's the son of Minato Namikaze for f*ck's sake. |
 sakura natsuki uchiha 2009-02-18 . chapter 1hi!
tank you for you comentary
i like you stoy
bye! |
 shattered-words 2009-02-12 . chapter 1a bit silly and pointless to be screaming at people when he knows they can't hear him, but still heartbreaking. i really loved reading this and watching kakashi struggle with himself. i think he's not that out of character at all. after all, Minato and his team mates were the only people that could probably make him have some sort of emotions. and in the story he seems to have passed it onto naruto. in short, i really loved it heh |
 FrozenVoices 2009-01-25 . chapter 1I really really like this. ;D I didn;t really find kakashi ooc at all, but I guess that's just me. |
 SecretSnow 2009-01-19 . chapter 1What I liked best was Minato yelling at the old lady, because it's so bitterly sad but it's funny in some sad way too. And it jsut seems so...Naruto. It seems like something naruto woud do and, naruto his his father's son. |
 Yangu Fuyu 2008-11-06 . chapter 1I'm crying! :'( So bad! It was good, SO SAD! |
 Dimly 2008-09-27 . chapter 1It was one of the saddest things I ever read; the ending was perfection, and I think you portrayed Minato-sama wonderfully. Thank you for all your hard work. |
 RubberDuckies 2008-09-10 . chapter 1Aw, so sad, but very moving. I almost cried...I liked it though. Nice job!:D |
 Queen of Light 17 2008-09-04 . chapter 1It brings up a lot of emotions. Anger, sad, and a sad-happy (if that makes any sense. I got very angry and the villagers and Naruto's caretaker. Poor Naruto he shouldn't go through that. Sad because of what he is going through. It was also very heart wrenching that the Minato's soul was right there and reading how helpless he felt. Kakashi too brings the sadness element. The ending brings a sad smile to my face cause even though Minato can't be there is person he's there for Naruto in spirit. And it makes sense about the ghost thing cause if there is one thing I know a ghost emotions can be unpredictable. Overall it was a very good story. Sad but good. Sorry for my long review I just felt the need to explain myself fully. Keep on writing. |
 Raine Haruto 2008-06-26 . chapter 1XD minato acted kinda like iruka |
 twin083 2008-06-23 . chapter 1good story i liked it. |
 Princess of blah blah blah 2008-06-23 . chapter 1that was so sad, but i liked it and i have to agree minato's emotions were kinda funny lolz
great story! |
 seienryu 2008-06-21 . chapter 1thats is really sweet... hope you could make a sequel of this story where minato is revived.. |
 Lupanari 2008-06-20 . chapter 1Okay, I admit. This had me tearing up a little near the end. ;_; That WAS really sad. Those evil, evil villagers. They're lucky that Minato is dead, or he might have fired a Rasengan at each and every one of them.
I'm glad you included Kakashi in this. It is my firm belief that in some way, shape or form, he was looking after Naruto during his childhood, even if there's no cannon evidence of it. So I like how you showed that. :)
...The Council needs to die. In a very painful way. |