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Maigo no Eien
2009-05-17 . chapter 4
MORE COMMENTARY!

well written, simple but elegant.

I can't find anything wrong with it.

^.^
--Alex
Gabi Howard
2008-09-17 . chapter 4
More L would be lovely- and these cases are fascinating. I have yet to come across anything quite like this fic as a whole, and I'm really enjoying it (despite the fact I hadn't worked out either of the solutions).
vegetaslover9
2008-07-23 . chapter 4
On the second one i was expecting ice again, have him stand on it, it melt, and the water evaporate. But i did guess suicide :)
vegetaslover9
2008-07-23 . chapter 2
Woot, i got it compleatly right :)

This was very fun to do and i love Ryuuzaki's remarks
XyXa.ArtofthePuppetMaster.oXiX
2008-07-11 . chapter 4
wow

i like this

i got the first case wrong because i though he was stabbed with a pipe and the wife moved it so yea

but i got the second one right ^^

keep up the good job

Kira
S. T. Nickolian
2008-07-07 . chapter 4
Well, I did bad on that one! XD Oh, you should check out the manga Majin Tantei Nougami Neuro - it has a lot of murder mysteries and such in it, I think you'd enjoy it. There's a little bit of demonic stuff in there, but so does death note, ne? ^^
Shadow-L-Chan
2008-07-07 . chapter 4
Sweet!
...
I'm just addicted to thinking ice is behind every thing I guess. :)
PandaMouse
2008-07-07 . chapter 2
Grah, dern you, L! XD
You just have to be fifty steps ahead of me, don't cha?! XD
Dang... I completely missed that. X3 Hopefully I shall do better on the next one, though! :D

2008-07-07 . chapter 1
First of all, I would like to say that this is such a wonderful idea and it's very interesting! :D
Hopefully I get this right... X3

1. Who is the murderer(s)?

Okay, let's look things over... Personally I think that the wife was a bit too sour for me to be too suspicious about her, her reaction was understandable considering her husband was recently killed and she is a suspect... although, the only present signs of evidence were of Mr. and Mrs. Edmunds...
Lenny Osborn seemed rather good-natured, despite his burst of anger during the conversation; one usually wouldn't harbor such strong feelings of hatred about a person who died only a while ago, but what ended up confusing me about him was how L was so persistently asking why he had named his place Sal's Dairy. I wouldn't think L would be so persistent if the information were irrelevant, so I am thinking that L has some suspicions regarding him.
And then Mark Sanders... he seemed a little quick to talk. To me, he was a bit too calm about the whole thing...
It's difficult... I'd most suspect both Mrs. Edmunds, because her fingerprints were found at the scene, and Mr. Sanders, because he said "Where anyone else is at three in the afternoon on a Monday: at work" and then followed up by claiming that he was the only one at work. Although, L's mysterious suspicion about Lenny Osborn... hmm...
In the end, though, I think I'll have to go with Mark Sanders. His contradicting statement is what lead me to that, as well as his quickness to get the whole thing over with. The only gap which I can find being how he didn't leave behind any evidence at the scene...

2. What is the murder weapon?

The description of it all just screamed "pipe" to me, and the more I learned about the weapon the more it did so, so I am going to go with that.

3. Where is the murder weapon?

Perhaps with Mr. Sanders, but more-than-likely disposed of.

..Herm... why do I have a strong feeling that I over-analyzed things and caused myself epic failure by doing so? XD
Pepper Muffin
2008-07-06 . chapter 4
-Pathetic sob-

I knew I was going to get that one wrong.

Can't wait for the next one!
Nuclear Winter Holiday
2008-07-04 . chapter 3
could the murderer not be a suspect?
perhaps Mrs edmunds sister
PR.Rot
2008-07-02 . chapter 3
the killer is : Suspect 2: Robert Keller, victim’s boss
couse he didnt have sympathy

More L talk in here please ^^


-x-x-x- PR.Rot
Arrancar-Baka
2008-06-29 . chapter 3
I think it's Mr. Keller. When he stiffens at the end...I think (if I'm correct) that might have given something away.

More L commentary next time! He amuses me.
Kage Inu8
2008-06-28 . chapter 3
It was his wife, as they were having money and marital problems, Keller had no relationship with the victim other than being his boss and had no reason to kill him, as lawyers lose cases all the time (actually one has to lose). Plus, Andrew's marital problems led to the job failure, making his wife first in line. And his wife's fingerprints were there as well. One thing I don't get, if they were so deep in debt why didn't they sell their "expensive" house?
Shadow-L-Chan
2008-06-28 . chapter 3
Let's see... to keep things somewhat logical, I'd say Mr. Turner killed himself by standing on a big block of ice that would have easily melted in the heat caused by Summer and the fire place. Motive was depression I guess...
As for L commentary. I liked it when L would interupt all the time so I'd like more of L. :3
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