Dude, this kicked ass. You know Edgar Vargas is on the character list right? I'll bet plenty of fans of this enigma of a man would love to read your story if they knew about it. I'm so glad I decided to visit your profile.

wonderful. just... amazing.

This is an amazing oneshot, this tops all the other Johnny and Edgar fics I've read so far. Why are there not more reviews. I think you need to spread this around. Put it on your Dev account, people need to read this. It really is quite perfect.

I read this and immediately had to read it again. I've never done that before. There is nothing I don't love about this. My god, why is this not one of those fics everyone knows about, speaking it's name in a near-awed whisper? I, shit, I can't explain how good this is. You've totally made me put Johnny in a new light and I couldn't be happier than I am right now.

Thank you.

That was confusing, to be honest, but very interesting. I cracked up at a few lines while others just puzzled me, but despite having to read a few lines over I really enjoyed the fic.
...It deserves more reviews than this.