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youkai chick supreme
2009-09-16 . chapter 1
Cute! Oh my god, so cute! Ah, I had to cover my eyes when I read Heero hit Duo's car... Oh man, I was asking myself, 'How could they met, hit his car? No way...' And then my mind exploded when he actually did it! But it was awesome. I loved this. Heero, you little traffic-stalker, you.
chang-ying
2009-09-09 . chapter 1
I never get tired of reading this story. Can I post it on my site. Message me and let me know.
mayfaire
2009-04-04 . chapter 1
Absolutely lovely just like your other 1x2 fics. I just had to admire Heero's determination to monitor the Duo for several months then make that make-or-break move. He is lucky that Duo is forgiving and has a weakness for a Japanese, stoic and sexy man.
reckless-rage
2009-02-03 . chapter 1
Aw. Heero envies the sun and the plastic bottle. *chuckles*
DSA
2008-09-21 . chapter 1
No doubt about it. Heero was stalking him. In an awkwardly, cute fashion, but it was still stalking. But I am glad he caught his prey.
Duo and Quatre
2008-08-14 . chapter 1
ah! ok that was great i loved it! write another one!
-megan
narcoleptic86
2008-08-03 . chapter 1
did he ever confess?
memme
2008-06-23 . chapter 1
:) Sweet story. Very sweet. And looking forward to anything else you write as usual.

My heart stopped at the idea of him putting a dent in that car, though! Oh my gosh!
AeryonSun
2008-06-21 . chapter 1
Wonderful I just loved this. This will definately be a favorite!
Azamiko
2008-06-21 . chapter 1
I can't help but wonder whether Heero told him that he did it on purpose...Hahaha!
Shkira
2008-06-20 . chapter 1
Hmm... I think it was VERY ballsy and painful of him to hit his car. I was thinking he was going to throw something in his car, but then that wouldn't have been a guarantee and after that one shot is blown, anything more WOULD be stalker-ey. Lol! So I guess it was the best choice, but...man... *currently has cosmetic car issues herself*

Another multi-chapter fic? Can't wait! Get well soon! (And that's not just for my selfish fangirl reading habits, colds suck big time)
camillian
2008-06-20 . chapter 1
heero's a persistent one here...enjoyed it very much :)
jess-eklom
2008-06-20 . chapter 1
Good fic! Too bad poor Duo's car had to suffer... but it all turned out well >^.^<

Thanks for sharing!
presser-kun
2008-06-20 . chapter 1
Nice plot. Realistic reaction from Duo. It was fun to read Heero as tentative, yet willing to go through with his plan.

I enjoyed this one a lot.
Artificial Starlight
2008-06-20 . chapter 1
Awesome, getting caught in traffic never felt so good. ^-^ I liked this one, AU and still fits them so well. I also looked up the Corvette... nice. Very sporty/ fancy looking. I like it. Ha ha.

But you know, I wonder if down the road Heero will tell Duo that he meant to bump his car on purpose. I can only imagine what Duo's reaction could be. Funny, but then, Heero did make it up to him so he'd let it slide. ^o^

Awesome writing, I love it, just like I love all of your stories. Can't wait for the new multi-chapter one, bet it'll be interesting. Hope you get better, those damn colds are everywhere (I have one too) You're not alone. ^-^
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