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LotusFlower640
2009-05-06 . chapter 3
Wow, that was the perfect ending for this chapter! I love this story so so so so much and it's only the beginning! Please update soon! Oh and can I ask why you have the word December at the end of your chapters?
LotusFlower640
2009-05-06 . chapter 2
I friggin loved this chapter! I'm so sad that there's only one more chapter until you update! I read your profile so you can take all the time you need. But you are going to continue this fic right?
LotusFlower640
2009-05-06 . chapter 1
Hi! This story sounds really interesting!
Penan
2008-10-05 . chapter 3
um well... i've just read the 3 chaps and im must say,
wow that was rly great i'd love to see how it ends:]
Just me and myself
2008-07-22 . chapter 3
This is great, I love the humor in it. Keep it up!
turn it up, shut it down
2008-07-21 . chapter 3
wow, how did i miss this story?
it's freakin awesome!
i love the details and formatting!
poor ichigo... i felt sorry for him... XD
i like the whole part that ichigo and orihime are together... it's like, forbidden for him and rukia to be!
where there's a will, there's a way, right? XD
awesome story! really!
i love how everyone is connected in some way.
it's cool! :)
violin recitals? wow, that's great!!
hope you can update soon!!
Yuyukawai
2008-07-12 . chapter 3
OMG I loved completely, I've just finish the three chapters..
the story seems freakin' tasty XD, the way they met each other was so nice, and this chapter was awesome, specially -Wonderful. So, he had been insulting not only Orihime’s boss, but his boss’s sister-in-law- oh poor Ichigo hahaha!
plz update soon dear ! i'll wait anxiously...
I loved the fact that Ichigo is already with someone, it's like somethin' ¨forbidden love¨ great job!
hugs and congratulations,
Yuyu°
Luna de Artemis
2008-07-11 . chapter 3
This is getting so good. Love the update!
Rukia-nee
2008-07-11 . chapter 3
Awesome update! Is all Ichigo and Rukia do is argue? XD Though I kind of felt bad for Ichigo in the end. Write when you can!
Glorious Jeux d'Enfants
2008-07-11 . chapter 3
nice history! XD!
intercostalspace
2008-07-10 . chapter 3
thanks for the update. write sooner please :)
Rubberducky921
2008-07-10 . chapter 3
I really like this story and it's plot!Please update soon!:3
Zapenbits
2008-07-10 . chapter 3
Wonderful update!
They weren't OOC at all! Ichigo wanting to see Rukia again was great ... the fact that he couldn't stop thinking about her made me swoon.
And Rukia cracked me up. Haha. That was brillant with the whole fight at the end. I loved how you said everything else disappeared; that it was just the two of them. Nice detail!
Great update!^_^
Violen?! Wow, awesome! You must have some incredible musical skills!=]
Update soon!
bigjokerspade
2008-07-10 . chapter 3
wonderful chapter!
the connections at the end are priceless!
somehow i can see them acting this way if they were real ppl... XD
great work here.
update when you can!!
My Name is Bailey
2008-07-10 . chapter 3
i absolutely love this!!
the ending was nice. i can just imagine the look on Ichigo's face! XD
update soon!
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