This is really well-written!

Very nice. Have you read the actual prequel JK wrote? It was amazing. Seriously. This was almost as good, but in a different way. This was much more serious, where hers was funny. I really liked it. Keep up the good work!

Very well written, you portrayed the characters perfectly. Loved it!

Besides, it's no fun to fight against DE's who can really hex you back--it was always better being one of four against one, and with the Map and the Cloak to make it even easier. Finding out that all that fun actually resulted in people not liking you who can do something about it can't be a good feeling. One has to wonder just how well the Marauders did when it wasn't four to one, from behind, and with the adminstration cheering them on.

Peter is in a bad situation here--now he has to be brave and help protect his friends, when it was always the other way around. Too bad he never developed the courage to stand up, either against his friends or for them.

Damn good story. I will say that. Though I had pretty much known it was Peter Pettigrew from the beginning, it was still good.