First off, you do not know how HAPPY I am to read a fic that is not Tory x Colin. I mean, that is my favorite, but variety is the spice of life!

I really like this fic, the whole thing is awesome. The section before the kissing, which could really be considered friendship, was my favorite part, though. I guess I like Paul as a father figure better.

Ah, I could almost ship this. I haven't reread my Off*Beat volumes lately, so I will, and look for Paul x Tory moments. :D

...goddammit, I might ship this now xD

Paul is SO lucky

There's more! Oh please, please tell me there's more! Even if there isn't anymore congratulations of putting up the very first Tory/Paul on the site! I've been waiting for one of these for the longest time and you my friend have done a very great job. I'll be awaiting great things from you!

Irvin Z. Martinez

Hee hee! I really like this story! When are you going to put the next chappie up? Can't wait!