Wow... You gave Lisa a ton more backstory than I've seen anyone attempt for her before. You made her a real person, too, which is also rare. It was nice, though a bit unsettling, to see someone that real and edgy inserted into Sam's oh-so-perfect life. Very nice work, powerful and effective writing. Keep up the good work!

Wow. That was just wow. This is the first Lisa fic I've read and I loved it. All the symbolic references to white were perfect, not used enough to become trite. Great job.

Wow. Just . . . a completely different take on Lisa than what most people write, and you did it so well. The imagery was stupendous, the way everything just tied together . . . this was amazing. Great job.