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| go.suck.on.a.lemon 2008-06-22 ch 1, | abuseGiggle, love it! euphemisms are so marvy... |
| Kathryn Shadow 2008-06-20 ch 1, | abuseI'm gonna hug you now. -hugs- Yay! Metaphors! :D |
| Raxacoricofallapatorius 2008-06-20 ch 1, | abuse"where they spent the next few hours happily experimenting with his rhythm stick." Hahaha very good line! Good little one shot, I liked it =) |
| lyin' 2008-06-20 ch 1, | abuselol, definitely fluff, very sugary but still in-character and just a delight to read. nice story, and way to play off an actual missed destination :D |
| x-EmilyTennant-x 2008-06-20 ch 1, | abuseHA! I LOVE that last line! Absolutely brilliant! I love that song and wondered what it meant, but I think that gives a clear idea... Hehe! Very nicely written! |
| I-Confuse-Everyone 2008-06-20 ch 1, | abuseThat last line made the whole fic. Which was already fantastic anyway! Great work! |