Please update. I can't wait to see where you go with this story.

Telling their families should be very interesting! Please continue soon!

It has a good story line, but I agree with other people if you don't have a beta, use spell and grammar check. Or just reread your stuff. Sorry if it sounds mean but it is true.

hey. it seems you dont know the difference between 'taught' and 'thought'
TAUGHT: ex. My teacher TAUGHT me a different way to solve math problems.
THOUGHT: I THOUGHT this was the easiest way to solve the problem, but I stand corrected.

Like, holy jeez. Get a beta or reread your stuff. and also, this kind of seems a bit repetitive...
sorry=(

How cute. Those two really do belong together.

you really need a beta reader

Great

The story line is interesting. However, you have a problem with staying in the same tense. It's annoying. You also have a lot of spelling mistakes, and misused words. This chapter was obviously not proof read. Another issue I have is there is no explanation of anything, description etc. Update though.

Great job with the chapter! Can't wait for more!

sweet and cute. i like how you get them making things burst forth. i don't think Logan would go without though.

im glad he didnt freak out and run but his whole who's the father think pissed me off does he seriously think that it couldnt have been him and that she was sleeping around or something. glad he's sticking around and that he loves her.

well good I I'm glad he wants to stick around for her and the baby and is not going anywhere and wants to help her raise thier child

will they tell Lorelai together or will Rory do it alone?
does Lorelai already know?
how will she react to the news?
will Rory and Logan get married before they have the baby or after?
how will the town/Luke/Chris/The Gilmore's/The Huntzbgers all react to this news?
will they all want to be there for Rory and Logan and the baby and welcome them in thier arms or will they freeze them out and tell them they made a mistake and to deal with it on thier own?
where will Rory and Logan go on thier honeymoon and who will watch the baby?
Will Rory and Logan still work or will they be stay at home parents and just work from home?
will rory and logan switch off days they go to work to watch the baby?
will they drop the babe off in Stars Hollow everyday on thier way to work?
where will Rory be when her water breaks and she goes into labor?
will logan be there or will he miss the birth of thier child?
will lorelai be in the delivery room coaching Rory?

That was such a cute chapter! I loved it, and i hope you found your story.

great

GREAT! I cannot wait to see how they will inform everyone!